My poems are outdated. Are welcome in modern society? Comments, please?

The Bud Vase From my window, sits a simple bottle of the crystal face that come late, it seems to me to be a perfect fit small vase. I won a flower my mom who had a bouquet of flowers, so I took the daffodils and scissors when she did not know. And when she was not looking, I found the perfect small short shoots, and I found inside the flowers also bleed blood. Plano Never in all my days (of stealing flowers are not mine) Am I so each Once they find life played between the veins of the flowers grown. I cut her mother, and you have bled green to the tips of fingers and even the long dead flower smell His blood still lingers. But so, to remove the cup of death I filled in for the work that suits, the interior, I'll get some baby care, this time to keep the roots. (Copyright 2007)

I want .... that rhyme with a touch of metro ..... short lines .... succinct syntax .... ...... good reminds me of Emily Dickinson here .... I want to share some of my writings outdated ...... The Tattered Beast, staggering, threw it and broke, the ship was battered, beaten more. Fists of foam, the storm pulled, and pulled the ship and broke again. mumbled, splashing, spinning and spraying the deck bowed and prayed. But the one, ignored the need for greed and jealousy. Who were they to try to own the ridges, waves, foam and foam? Who were in his pride to try to tame your pet, your animal? The water roared, reared, it rained, the beast who drowned, is murdered, maimed. As if with rage, not attending people who took it, or those they saved. Then, at once, his anger spent the lesson, he did give. The chosen sank into his grave on his tombstone, but a salty wave. Little by little, rather than trying to capture, trap, and then die. In the dark and cold of greed will in the belly of the beast. old school is the better ..... its what made us all to be poets .... Keep On Keepin in JR

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